First draft:

Frazzle leaned over and lapped at her tea, eyes up to watch Izzy work. She winced at the clattering from in there.

Second draft:

Frazzle leaned over and lapped at her tea, eyes up to watch Izzy work. She levitated the books with great care, but when she headed for the bathroom Frazzle winced at the clattering from in there.

Third draft:

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